迈润肯留学石老师 2024-08-22 19:47:44

震惊!美高党邮件沟通竟有这些“生死”细节等着你!

熟悉美国文化的朋友一定清楚,邮件在学习、生活以及工作中都是极为常用的联系方式之一。对于美高党而言,邮件更是与老师、counselor沟通的常见情形,如表达对课堂老师的讲课有疑问,对自己成绩单上的成绩有异议,或对自己在高中的选课有顾虑等

然而,如果这些邮件不能以正确的方式完成和发送,不仅可能被忽略,还会给人留下不专业或无礼的不良声誉。因此,对于每个高中同学而言,撰写电子邮件至关重要。一封邮件需要表达出自己的疑问和想要解决的难题,都需要从礼数上和技巧上做足功课。


01格式规范

1.邮件地址 Email Address:
电子邮件地址需保持专业,关键在于简洁。例如采用 johnsmith@example.com 或 john.smith@example.com 这样的形式。切勿通过添加数字或创意标语来个性化邮箱地址,任何包含姓名之外内容的电子邮件地址通常会被视为不专业。若职场人士收到来自不专业地址的邮件,可能不会认真对待其内容。若已有不专业的邮箱地址,值得为专业用途另创一个,这样可能会获得更多回复以及发件对象的尊重。
 

2.主题行 Subject Line:
主题行应简洁地表明写作目的,可为简单的“Thank You”或“Request for Recommendation”。

3.问候语 Greeting:
邮件开头总是要有问候语,如“Dear Amy”。若与收件人关系正式,使用其姓氏,如“Dear Mrs. Smith”;关系较随意可简单说“Hi Amy”。若不知收件人姓名,可使用“To whom it may concern”或“Dear Sir/Madam”。

4.表明你的目的 State Your Purpose:
以表明目的开启邮件,例如“I am writing to enquire about …”或“I am writing in reference to …”。明确目的后进入邮件主要内容。需记住,人们希望快速阅读邮件,所以要保持句子简短清晰,使邮件简洁。只包含必要信息,同时注意语法、拼写和标点符号,以展现专业形象。

5.结尾 Closing:
最后一步是加上恰当的结尾并署名,如“Best regards”“Sincerely”“Thank you”等。除非与收件人是好朋友,否则避免使用“Best wishes”或“Cheers”等表述。在点击发送按钮前,检查并进行拼写检查,确保邮件完美无误。


02内容要领

1.注意语气:

在写邮件时,应避免使用“I want”和“I would like”。可多使用“I was wondering if”(务必用“was”,而不是“I wonder”或“I am wondering”)。

同时,多运用“would it be possible”,这样从语法上能避免直接涉及“人”,从而减轻对方的压力。

另外,尽量避免使用“please”,因为“please”隐含了自己的期望,会给对方带来压力,相对而言是不太礼貌的表达。

写邮件时还需注意避免中式英语,不能让邮件读起来像是中文语气翻译过来的。要用美式思维和美式习惯来撰写英文邮件内容。

2.简洁明了:

避免使用长句子,当内容较多时最好进行分段。对于特别希望对方看到的重点内容(如时间、地点、金额等)一定要加粗显示 

3.注意语法:

在邮件完成后,可将文本内容放入 Outlook Express 等软件中,利用它们的“拼写检查”功能查看是否存在明显语法错误。

此外,还可以通过 Google 进行查询。语法问题虽不是大事,但却能体现你的细心程度、对收信人的重视度,从侧面也能反映出你的责任心。电子邮件会给人留下第一印象,对个人的评判也会产生影响。

4.注意字体:
避免使用华丽、有趣或彩色字体,以免分散收件人注意力。也不要过度使用粗体和斜体,以免邮件显得杂乱。更不能用大写字母书写,在邮件中这会显得愤怒或过度兴奋。

5.表情符号:
专业电子邮件中不要包含表情符号,将其留作私人信件使用。

6.邮件习惯:

如果你和你的联系人不是第一次发邮件了,美国人习惯在邮件开头的时候加一两句问候的话,就好像寒暄一下。

如果之前联系过,尽量把上一次联系的邮件翻出来,接着那封邮件写,这样别人即使一时没反应过来你是谁,看到之前的历史记录也会想起来。

邮件发送后注意事项:
若对方一周未回复,可发送一封跟进邮件。可能邮件意外进入了他们的垃圾文件夹,或者他们看到但忘记回复。

跟进邮件应在发送初始邮件两周内发出,且要比上一封更简短。简单感谢对方的时间和考虑,询问是否有机会看到上一封邮件,同时要尊重对方的时间和精力。


03范文示例

请教选课邮件

Subject: Seeking Advice on Course Selection for High School

I hope this email finds you well. My name is [Your Name] and I am currently a student at [Your High School's Name]. As the new academic year approaches, I find myself facing some concerns regarding my course selection for the upcoming school year.
Firstly, I am unsure about which courses would best align with my future career goals. While I have a general idea of the field I want to pursue, I am struggling to determine which subjects would provide me with the necessary knowledge and skills. Additionally, I am worried about balancing my academic workload with extracurricular activities and maintaining a healthy social life.
Given your experience and expertise in guiding students through their high school journey, I was hoping to seek your advice on this matter. Specifically, I would appreciate it if you could share your insights on the following questions:
How can I identify courses that will help me achieve my career objectives?
What strategies do you recommend for managing a heavy course load while still being involved in extracurricular activities?
Are there any particular classes or programs at our school that you believe would be beneficial for me based on my interests and strengths?
I understand that you may have a busy schedule, but any guidance or suggestions you could offer would be greatly appreciated. If possible, I would love to set up a meeting with you at your convenience to discuss these matters further. Please let me know if there is a specific time and date that works for you.
Thank you very much for taking the time to read my email, and I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Best regards,

[Your Name] [Your Contact Information]

请假邮件

Subject: Inquiry Regarding Leave Request for This Week

Dear Prof. XXX,

    I trust this communication reaches you in good health and spirits. My name is XXX, and I am currently enrolled in your XXX course. I am penning this email to apprise you of the fact that I shall be unable to attend the XXX (course name) this week on account of an unforeseen health occurrence.

      I have not been in my best condition this week. After visiting the health center, the duty nurse recommended that I rest in bed for two days. I tender my most sincere apologies for my absence and any inconvenience thereby entailed, as I am fully cognizant of the significance of regular class attendance. I shall exert every effort to make up for the materials covered during this period and ensure that I am abreast of the curriculum promptly upon my recovery.

Thank you profoundly for your comprehension.

Sincerely,
(Name)




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